MORE PROFESSIONAL WRITING
Is there anything wrong with the group of words below? What? Are you able to correct it?
"Because his replacement for a system that favours Roman Catholicism to the exclusion of other religions has all the markings of an expensive and unwieldy education regime that will be all but impossible to oversee with any coherency."
Lead Editorial, "School debate", The Windsor Star, Thursday, September 20, 2007.
The word for today is "ludicrous".
Define "ludicrous" and use it in a sentence. Relating your example to writing skill is permissible.