Below are the corrections and explanations for last week's postings.
Monday
RAISE/RISE
"Raise" means "to make higher," "build" or "nurture and cause to grow". It is normally transitive.
"Rise" means "to get up" or "become elevated". It is never transitive.
Tuesday
Read the following sentences and choose the correct verb form:
The subjects are all plural and demand plural verbs.
1. The girls (have, has) prepared a lunch.
The girls have prepared a lunch.
2. Many of the neighbours (has, have) gone to the picnic.
Many of the neighbours have gone to the picnic.
3. At the door (sit, sits) Dick and Tom.
At the door sit Dick and Tom.
4. Hail and frost often (injure, injures) the fruit crops.
Hail and frost often injure the fruit crops.
INTENT vs MEANING
Read the sentence below. Try to determine what the author intended. Explain whether or not he used the correct wording. If you think it is incorrect, fix it.
"I don't know about you, but I'm anxious as hell to hear the reasons for the university's alleged thumbs-down on downtown."
I suggest there is no anxiety in wanting the reasons but, instead, keenness to hear the results. Therefore, “anxious” is the wrong word.
"I don't know about you, but I'm eager as hell to hear the reasons for the university's alleged thumbs-down on downtown."
Wednesday
BETWEEN/AMONG
“Between” is with two people or things. Never use “to” with “between”.
“Among” is used when discussing three or more people or things.
He travelled between New York and Toronto.
His choice of teams was among the Tigers, the Yankees and the Blue Jays.
Thursday
AMOUNT/NUMBER
Use the word “amount” with quantities that cannot be counted and “number” with quantities that could be counted one-by-one.
“He had a small amount of money left.”
“He had a small number of bills in his pocket.”
Friday
1. She is a very unique personality.
“Unique” means “one of a kind”. It is an absolute and cannot be compared.
She is a unique personality.
2. He drew an extremely straight line on the page.
“Straight” means “without bending”. It is an absolute and cannot be qualified.
He drew an extremely straight line on the page.
3. They were very overwhelmed with emotion.
Either one is “overwhelmed” (overtaken) or one is not. It is an absolute and cannot be qualified.
They were overwhelmed with emotion.
4. "You are so right!"
Either one is “right” or one is “wrong”. There is no in between. It is an absolute and cannot be qualified.
"You are right!"
THIS WEEK’S WORDS
“Emasculate" (v.) means to deprive of strength, vigour or masculinity, to be made effeminate.
“Exactitude" (n.) means accuracy or correctness.
“Depravity" (n.) means impairment of virtue or morals, depraved or morally perverted.
“Lugubrious" (adj.) means anguished, excessively mournful or suffering.
“Sylvan" (adj.) means shady, woody or inhabiting the woods.
SHAKESPEAREAN KNOWLEDGE
All the world ’s a stage,
And all the men and women merely players.
They have their exits and their entrances;
And one man in his time plays many parts,
His acts being seven ages.”
As You Like It, Jacques, Act II. Sc. Vii. (Get a copy of the play if you want the rest.)
Sunday, December 2, 2007
Friday, November 30, 2007
FRIDAY CHALLENGE
COMMON MISUSES
Each of the following has an error in it. What is the error? What is the common link of all the errors?
1. She is a very unique personality.
2. He drew an extremely straight line on the page.
3. They were very overwhelmed with emotion.
4. "You are so right!"
TODAY'S WORD
The word for today is "sylvan".
Define "sylvan" and use it in a sentence.
CORRECTIONS AND EXPLANATIONS
Corrections and explanations for this week's entries will be posted Sunday.
Each of the following has an error in it. What is the error? What is the common link of all the errors?
1. She is a very unique personality.
2. He drew an extremely straight line on the page.
3. They were very overwhelmed with emotion.
4. "You are so right!"
TODAY'S WORD
The word for today is "sylvan".
Define "sylvan" and use it in a sentence.
CORRECTIONS AND EXPLANATIONS
Corrections and explanations for this week's entries will be posted Sunday.
Thursday, November 29, 2007
THURSDAY'S CHALLENGE
AMOUNT/NUMBER
What is the difference in usage of the words "amount" and "number".
(This is very similar to the use of the words "fewer" and "less".)
TODAY'S WORD
The word for today is "lugubrious".
("Lugubrious" is not a common word. I just like the sound of it; it reminds me of the accents in the Sopranos TV series.)
Define "lugubrious" and try to use it in a sentence.
What is the difference in usage of the words "amount" and "number".
(This is very similar to the use of the words "fewer" and "less".)
TODAY'S WORD
The word for today is "lugubrious".
("Lugubrious" is not a common word. I just like the sound of it; it reminds me of the accents in the Sopranos TV series.)
Define "lugubrious" and try to use it in a sentence.
Wednesday, November 28, 2007
HOW SHARP ARE YOU?
BETWEEN/AMONG
What is the difference in usage with the words "between" and "among"?
SHAKESPEAREAN KNOWLEDGE
"All the world's a stage and all the men and women merely players."
What is the next line?
What is the play? Who is the speaker?
TODAY'S WORD
The word for today is "depravity".
Define "depravity" and use it in a sentence.
What is the difference in usage with the words "between" and "among"?
SHAKESPEAREAN KNOWLEDGE
"All the world's a stage and all the men and women merely players."
What is the next line?
What is the play? Who is the speaker?
TODAY'S WORD
The word for today is "depravity".
Define "depravity" and use it in a sentence.
Tuesday, November 27, 2007
TEST TIME
YOUR CHOICE
Read the following sentences and choose the correct verb form:
1. The girls (have, has) prepared a lunch.
2. Many of the neighbours (has, have) gone to the picnic.
3. At the door (sit, sits) Dick and Tom.
4. Hail and frost often (injure, injures) the fruit crops.
INTENT vs MEANING
Read the sentence below. Try to determine what the author intended. Explain whether or not he used the correct wording. If you think it is incorrect, fix it.
"I don't know about you, but I'm anxious as hell to hear the reasons for the university's alleged thumbs-down on downtown."
Gord Henderson, "The ivy ghetto", The Windsor Star, Tuesday, November 27, 2007.
TODAY'S WORD
The word for today is "exactitude".
Define "exactitude" and use it in a sentence.
Read the following sentences and choose the correct verb form:
1. The girls (have, has) prepared a lunch.
2. Many of the neighbours (has, have) gone to the picnic.
3. At the door (sit, sits) Dick and Tom.
4. Hail and frost often (injure, injures) the fruit crops.
INTENT vs MEANING
Read the sentence below. Try to determine what the author intended. Explain whether or not he used the correct wording. If you think it is incorrect, fix it.
"I don't know about you, but I'm anxious as hell to hear the reasons for the university's alleged thumbs-down on downtown."
Gord Henderson, "The ivy ghetto", The Windsor Star, Tuesday, November 27, 2007.
TODAY'S WORD
The word for today is "exactitude".
Define "exactitude" and use it in a sentence.
Monday, November 26, 2007
MONDAY HELP
CLARIFICATION - LESS/FEWER
“Fewer” is used with objects that can be counted one-by-one.
“Less” is used with objects or quantities that cannot be counted individually.
Correct:
“There are fewer cars on the road after three am.” "Cars" can be counted individually.
"There was less water in the bucket." "Water" cannot be counted individually.
RAISE/RISE
What is the difference between "raise" and "rise"?
Try to use the words in sentences and in various tenses.
TODAY'S WORD
The word for today is "emasculate".
Define "emasculate" and use it in a sentence.
“Fewer” is used with objects that can be counted one-by-one.
“Less” is used with objects or quantities that cannot be counted individually.
Correct:
“There are fewer cars on the road after three am.” "Cars" can be counted individually.
"There was less water in the bucket." "Water" cannot be counted individually.
RAISE/RISE
What is the difference between "raise" and "rise"?
Try to use the words in sentences and in various tenses.
TODAY'S WORD
The word for today is "emasculate".
Define "emasculate" and use it in a sentence.
Sunday, November 25, 2007
CORRECTIONS & EXPLANATIONS - November 25, 2007
Here are the corrections and explanations for last week's postings.
Monday
FEWER/LESS
This is a repeat but it needs reemphasis.
“Fewer” is used with objects that can be counted one-by-one.
“There are fewer cars on the road after three am.”
“Less” is used with objects or quantities that cannot be counted individually.
“She worked fewer hours than I did last week.”
Tuesday
"The highest number of deaths were cancer related."
The subject of the sentence is “number” and it is singular. It demands the singular verb “was”.
"The highest number of deaths was cancer related."
"The biggest story on the weather front are the weather maps."
The subject of the sentence is “story” and it is singular. It demands the singular verb “is”. It is, also, poorly worded.
"The biggest story on the weather front is the weather maps."
Wednesday
"Brace yourself Windsor. Because the worst is yet to come."
“Because the worst is yet to come” is a subordinate clause and cannot stand by itself; it must be attached to a principal clause to be complete. I do not accept that newspaper writing is allowed such poetic licence.
"Brace yourself Windsor because the worst is yet to come."
Thursday
MEDIUM/MEDIA
I will limit this discussion to “medium” and “media” as “vehicles of communication”.
“Medium” is singular and refers to one form of communication such as radio.
“Media” is plural and refers to all forms of communication collectively.
Therefore, to refer to TV as media is incorrect; it is only one medium of communication.
Friday
"The westbound SUV lost control and went into the eastbound lane..."
The error here is a diction error: the SUV did not lose control; the driver lost control. The sentence should be reworded.
"The driver of the westbound SUV lost control and the vehicle went into the eastbound lane..."
"The Leamington couple were pronounced dead at the scene."
This is another subject-verb agreement problem.
"The Leamington couple was pronounced dead at the scene."
"The crash site is one of several sections of 401 that don't have barriers."
“One” is the subject and is singular. The verb must also be singular.
"The crash site is one of several sections of 401 that doesn't have barriers."
THIS WEEK’S WORDS
“Vitiate" (v.) means to corrupt morally, deprave or debase.
It is pronounced “vish- i-ate”.
“Perturbation" (n.) means discomposure, agitation or an unhappy or worried state of mind.
The root is “perturb”.
“Scurrilous" (adj.) means expressing abusive, insulting contemptuous or scornful reproach.
“Cataclysm" (n.) means a sudden violent change in the earth’s surface, a major upheaval in a social or political nature, a catastrophe.
“Mundane" (adj.) means unremarkable, routine, mediocre or pedestrian in nature.
THE POSERS
"Double, double, toil and trouble;
Fire burn and cauldron bubble.”
Macbeth, William Shakespeare, The Three Sisters, IV. I.
“...the law is a ass, a idiot.”
Oliver Twist, Charles Dickens, Mr. Bumble.
Monday
FEWER/LESS
This is a repeat but it needs reemphasis.
“Fewer” is used with objects that can be counted one-by-one.
“There are fewer cars on the road after three am.”
“Less” is used with objects or quantities that cannot be counted individually.
“She worked fewer hours than I did last week.”
Tuesday
"The highest number of deaths were cancer related."
The subject of the sentence is “number” and it is singular. It demands the singular verb “was”.
"The highest number of deaths was cancer related."
"The biggest story on the weather front are the weather maps."
The subject of the sentence is “story” and it is singular. It demands the singular verb “is”. It is, also, poorly worded.
"The biggest story on the weather front is the weather maps."
Wednesday
"Brace yourself Windsor. Because the worst is yet to come."
“Because the worst is yet to come” is a subordinate clause and cannot stand by itself; it must be attached to a principal clause to be complete. I do not accept that newspaper writing is allowed such poetic licence.
"Brace yourself Windsor because the worst is yet to come."
Thursday
MEDIUM/MEDIA
I will limit this discussion to “medium” and “media” as “vehicles of communication”.
“Medium” is singular and refers to one form of communication such as radio.
“Media” is plural and refers to all forms of communication collectively.
Therefore, to refer to TV as media is incorrect; it is only one medium of communication.
Friday
"The westbound SUV lost control and went into the eastbound lane..."
The error here is a diction error: the SUV did not lose control; the driver lost control. The sentence should be reworded.
"The driver of the westbound SUV lost control and the vehicle went into the eastbound lane..."
"The Leamington couple were pronounced dead at the scene."
This is another subject-verb agreement problem.
"The Leamington couple was pronounced dead at the scene."
"The crash site is one of several sections of 401 that don't have barriers."
“One” is the subject and is singular. The verb must also be singular.
"The crash site is one of several sections of 401 that doesn't have barriers."
THIS WEEK’S WORDS
“Vitiate" (v.) means to corrupt morally, deprave or debase.
It is pronounced “vish- i-ate”.
“Perturbation" (n.) means discomposure, agitation or an unhappy or worried state of mind.
The root is “perturb”.
“Scurrilous" (adj.) means expressing abusive, insulting contemptuous or scornful reproach.
“Cataclysm" (n.) means a sudden violent change in the earth’s surface, a major upheaval in a social or political nature, a catastrophe.
“Mundane" (adj.) means unremarkable, routine, mediocre or pedestrian in nature.
THE POSERS
"Double, double, toil and trouble;
Fire burn and cauldron bubble.”
Macbeth, William Shakespeare, The Three Sisters, IV. I.
“...the law is a ass, a idiot.”
Oliver Twist, Charles Dickens, Mr. Bumble.
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